Hiya! TheFaintHeart here. I’m super excited to be a part of this blog and even more excited to be bringing you a weekly instalment of Completed Fic Recommendations. First, I’d like to take a moment to point to my fancy, personalized banner. I’ll wait right here while you go ahead and take a second look. Give a round of applause for THE Chick Norris, she made it for me, it’s awesome, right?
About this segment: I’ve chosen to highlight the stories that are Complete. That is my only requirement. If I read it and like it, I’ll tell you about it. I will try to bring a wide variety of genres and pairings. However I am limited to what has been posted on TwiWrite. So get over there and get posting or hound your favorite authors and tell them to join us. Also, be sure to check out the list I have compiled of ALL the stories that are complete, right after you finish reading my first recommendation, which by the way, needs a MILD SPOILER WARNING:
Desired Distractions - Love or Lust By: Jaspers Sex Kitten
Summary: What happens when Jasper decides, Bella the new girl at school, is what he wants? Can he keep himself in control or will he loose himself to the monster inside. Bella is not what she seems. How will he react to her secrets? *Rated M for lang/lemons*
What first drew me to this oneshot was the last line of the summary, the prospect of Bella having secrets intrigued me. I wanted to know what they were. Now, I’ll admit I was expecting it to be something you’d find in a day time soap opera - a baby or maybe a problem with substance abuse - something along those lines.
The beginning is filled with the normal: boy sees girl, boy wants girl. Only it’s sexed up. Jasper isn’t shy with his imagination and doesn’t really care that Edward can hear his thoughts nor does he ignore what he knows to be true: he wants Bella. Badly.
What first drew me to this oneshot was the last line of the summary, the prospect of Bella having secrets intrigued me. I wanted to know what they were. Now, I’ll admit I was expecting it to be something you’d find in a day time soap opera - a baby or maybe a problem with substance abuse - something along those lines.
The beginning is filled with the normal: boy sees girl, boy wants girl. Only it’s sexed up. Jasper isn’t shy with his imagination and doesn’t really care that Edward can hear his thoughts nor does he ignore what he knows to be true: he wants Bella. Badly.
My day was spent thinking of the beauty I had laid my eyes on this morning. I imagined running my hands across her body and slipping my tongue into her.
What would her body look like under mine, as I fucked her until she screamed my name. Maybe I could just bite her, not inject venom, but just bite her. I wanted to mark her as mine.
As I read on, something seemed…off about Bella. Jasper is out for a run and happens to come across Bella’s house. Nothing out of the ordinary, yet. It was when the La Push boys made an appearance, I just figured it was a case of Bella already knowing about the wolves…I was wrong. Bella seemed to know what Jasper was too. I really thought that was her secret; that she already knew about the vampires and shape shifters. In my mind, as I was reading, it seemed like an easy out, I’m not gonna lie. But then Jasper’s Sex Kitten threw me a curve ball.
My eyes flew open and I heard a growl. It happened so fast that if I had been human I would've missed it. A grey wolf charged us and Bella hit it so hard it flew 100 feet into the treeline. My jaw hit the ground. What the fuck? Did that just happen? I shook my head and everyone was frozen place.
I know! Something is rotten in the state of Denmark…but it’s not ghosts like the Hamlet quote I just used refers to. Oh no, Bella has bigger fish to fry than Casper. I’m not going to say what Bella shares with Jasper, that would ruin all the fun when you read it.
And if your interest isn’t piqued enough yet, read it for the lemon. It starts off against a tree. Really, A TREE! If that doesn’t get you excited, what would you say to a slightly dominant Bella, cause that’s in there too!
After the tree sex, we have the climax (pun intended and not intended) of the story. This is where things start to get interesting. More of Bella’s secrets are revealed. While Jasper’s Sex Kitten never comes out and actually tells us what Bella is, she gives the reader enough information to piece the puzzle together.
She also leaves room for further development, which is nice. I found myself wanting to know more about Bella and her story, how she came to be the way she is. I just know that can’t be the final resolution to her conflict. Jasper’s Sex Kitten even admitted there’s a possibility for more in the End Notes. However, it would seem she’s on the fence about continuing and needs a little encouragement.
Definitely check out this oneshot if you like a little mystery with your citrus and be sure to tell Jasper’s Sex Kitten that TheFaintHeart sent you to ask for more!
I'm so happy you are doing this. I'm getting to where I more and more look for completed fics nowadays. So this is going to be one of my favorite segments.